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Chapter 5: Building the World - Setting and Atmosphere

August 11th, 2023 Blake Myers 3 min. read
Last updated: September 18th, 2023 9:09 am
Tunnels

Today, in Redink Chapter 5, we delve into the intricate process of building the atmospheric setting that will immerse you in the haunting world of this story. Join me as we explore the historical, cultural, and geographic elements that shape the very fabric of this chilling tale.

As an American author residing in the Czech Republic, but with a story set in the heart of the United Kingdom, I faced the challenge of bridging the cultural divide. I wanted my characters to speak and think in a way that was authentic and believable to British readers, while still remaining accessible to American and non-native readers. Extensive research and immersion in British films, literature, and language became my guiding compass, allowing me to infuse the dialogue and thoughts of the characters with the nuances of British culture. While this alone doesn't create atmosphere, it was one hurdle in expressing the atmostphere I envisioned.

Another significant obstacle arose when it came to selecting the main setting—a forensics lab. While this environment was crucial for the story's plot and atmosphere, I needed to take certain liberties to isolate the main character effectively. These modifications were made possible through a specific plotline that, for now, remains a secret waiting to be unveiled within the pages of the book itself.

While I have always been captivated by haunted house stories, a traditional gothic mansion or castle did not align with the practicality of "Bella's" narrative. This story is, in essence, a "haunted parish", with Bella's presence seeping into every corner. In my exploration, I stumbled upon the Drakelow tunnels, mere miles away from Hagley, UK. These 3.5 miles of underground, man-made tunnels date back to World War II, serving as a secret manufacturing plant for airplane parts of that era. Although the tunnels currently house a wine depot for inports/exports, a few sections remain open to the public. While only a few chapters unfold within this intriguing location, it provides a fresh take on the overused "haunted house" trope, injecting the story with a unique and chilling atmosphere.

Typically, I embrace humor and find myself cracking jokes even in the most inappropriate moments. However, for "Who Put Bella in the Wych Elm?", I consciously tempered these humorous moments to maintain a consistent and serious tone throughout. While a few lighthearted moments may emerge in the early stages of the story, the overall narrative leans toward a more solemn atmosphere, designed to keep you on the edge of your seat.

In crafting the world of "Who Put Bella in the Wych Elm?"—a modern setting grounded in the "real" world—I relied on nuanced approaches to enhance the atmosphere. Throughout the text, you will find subtle descriptions intricately woven into the narrative, painting vivid imagery and evoking emotions that will draw you deeper into the haunting tapestry of the story.

For instance, as the characters navigate their eerie surroundings, the air may carry a tangible sense of foreboding—a chill that lingers despite the absence of a physical presence. The descriptions of landscapes and architectural details may subtly hint at the underlying darkness that permeates the parish, setting the stage for the chilling events that unfold.

Through these delicate brushstrokes of descriptive prose, I aim to create an atmospheric experience that will send shivers down your spine and transport you into the haunting world of "Who Put Bella in the Wych Elm?"

Yours eerily,
Blake

atmosphere, world building

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